4. 有禮得體
寫郵件時,盡量清晰地陳述所寫的內容,無論是請求一次工作面試,還是進行其他的業務聯繫,最好不要用「I want」之類的詞語表示要求,而用「I would like」顯得更尊重對方;「I am interested in」則是提出請求建議,或者尋求意見的較好選擇。
5. 電子郵件的正確結尾
「I am looking forward to your (early) reply(望早日答覆)」、「Thank you」或者「Sincerely(誠摯的)」都是給收信人留下良好印象的結尾方式。
請參看以下範文:
TO: susan.lin@pearsoned-earn.com —[1]
FROM: sar032@aol.com (Shirely Taylor) —[2]
DATE: Monday, May 26, 2003 —[3]
TIME: 4:30:27 GMT —[4]
SUBJECT: A-Z of Business Communications —[5]
Dear Mrs. Lin, —[6]
I wrote to you on 23 May describing our new Gro-More range and enclosing our latest catalogue. I have not received a reply from you and wonder if you actually received my letter? —[7]
I will be very happy to answer any questions you may have about our Gro-More range and explain the unique features and benefits to you.
Alternatively I would be pleased to arrange for one of our representatives to visit you and bring some samples to show you.
Your custom is very valuable to us. If there is any way I can help you, please do not hesitate to write to me.
Sincerely, —[8]
Shirley —[9]
SHIRLEY TAYLOR —[10]
Manager of Sales Department
Koffit Trading Co., Ltd.
Add.: 15 Western Avenue, Shanghai, China
Tel.: 86-21-88654987
Fax: 86-21-88654988
Email: abccompany@alibaba.com
Catalogue: http://abccompany.alibaba.com
請注意格式:
[1]收信人的電郵地址
[2]發信人的電郵地址
[3]寫信日期
寫日期時,請注意以下幾點:
a. 年份要寫完整,不能用03代替2003。
b. 月份要寫英文名稱,不能用數字來代替,如31/3/03不能在正式的郵件中出現。但是可以用英文縮寫,比如用Aug.代替August。
[4]時間
[5]主題
[6]稱呼
[7]正文
[8]結束語
[9]簽名
[10]聯繫方法
這部分內容要完整,包括寫信人姓名、職位、公司名稱以及聯繫方法(住址、電話、傳真、電郵地址、網站)。寫地址時要注意:一般來說,門牌號和街道名稱之間不用逗號隔開,但城市名稱和國家名稱之間一定要用逗號。你可以在自己的郵箱預設一個範本。每次寫信只要選擇這個範本,信件會自動顯示這些內容。
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